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Supporting Pasifika learners

Successful literacy learning is the backbone of success at school. All learners in New Zealand classrooms need to have strong literacy teaching. Teaching in a way that is responsive to the diversity in our classrooms has the most profound effect on our literacy learners. Strong school–whānau relationships, culturally responsive classrooms, and the deliberate use of effective teaching strategies can all help Pasifika learners achieve success.

Effective literacy teachers

Teachers are central to the learning of Pasifika students and their impact cannot be overstated. Teachers who have a positive impact on students are those who:

  • Understand what it is like to be the “other,” know about the pressures on students’ out-of-school lives and experiences and can link teaching and learning with those experiences 
  • Provide multiple opportunities for students to clarify their learning 
  • Use assessment data from numbers of sources to understand students’ reading and writing in content areas 
  • Can use assessment data to locate their students’ skills and needs within the context and content of their curriculum area 
  • Canvas the views of students about their learning and about their learning needs 
  • Use data with students to measure success 
  • Have in-depth knowledge of the literacy challenges in their curriculum area. 

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Pasifika students and literacy in the classroom

Teaching digital stories using tuakana-teina
Irongate School has a focus on improving student literacy levels particularly for their large population of Māori and Pasifika students. The older or more expert tuakana (Year 5/6 students) help and guide the younger or less expert teina (new entrant students).

The impact of using Google Apps on literacy learning in the classroom
Liz Maclennan from Breens Intermediate shares how she is using Google Apps with her students to raise literacy levels, particularly for Māori and Pasifika students, in her classroom. Through the use of Google docs, Gmail, and blogger students are able to share their work with parents, their teacher, and their peers. Allowing students access to lesson plans enables students to refer back to learning intentions, assessment rubrics, and key ideas whenever they need them. 

Resources

NZC Update 27 - Tula‘i Mai! Making a difference to Pasifika student achievement in literacy
This Update shares messages from research about classroom practices that make a difference to Pasifika student achievement in literacy. 

Literacy strategies for pasifika students
A slideshow created to examine relevant research and discuss effective literacy strategies for pasifika students.

Action Plan for Pacific Education 2020-2030

Through the fono series of 2018 and 2019, Pacific learners, families, teachers, leaders and communities shared what matters to them in education: an education system that is free from racism; that values Pacific children, young people and families as leaders of learning; and supports them to feel safe, valued and equipped to achieve their education aspirations. We know that some things matter even more now because of COVID-19 like access to education, and meaningful pathways that lead to employment, learner and family wellbeing. We have great pleasure in sharing with you the Action Plan for Pacific Education 2020-2030. 

Vaka Moana - Pasifika educational journeys
Natalie Faitala, Head of English at Wesley College, talks about the research she conducted into Pasifika literacy in secondary schools, and the impact on students' subject choice for NCEA. Natalie found that Pasifika students are not engaging with a range of literature and consequently not developing literacy in their homes. She advocates for more resources to be created and used for Pasifika students' literacy learning.

Effective pedagogy for our Māori and Pasifika students
At Sylvia Park School, staff believe that Māori and Pacific student achievement is based on effective pedagogy and that effective pedagogy looks the same for any child. This story explores what these beliefs look like in practice.

Tapasā: Cultural Competencies Framework for Teachers of Pacific Learners
Tapasā is a resource for all teachers of Pacific learners. It is designed to support teachers to become more culturally aware, confident and competent when engaging with Pacific learners and their parents, families and communities. It aims to contextualise quality teaching and planning within a Pacific learner setting by providing a Pacific lens to the Standards for the Teaching Profession and the Code of Professional Responsibility.

Research and readings

Influences on Pasifika students' achievement in literacy
How do students from minority groups develop effective literacy skills? The perceptions of two groups of Pasifika students—one achieving and one underachieving in literacy learning—are compared. They identify pedagogical practices and family or community factors as influential on their literacy learning.

An Investigation of Sites, Uses and Practices for Literacy in the Lives of Pasifika Students 
This thesis considers what can be learned when teachers are better informed of the out-of-school literacy practices of Pasifika students and investigates students’ social and cultural uses of literacy in family and community settings. It explores the argument that knowledge of these out-of-school literacies will inform teachers to make effective connections for students to school literacy. 

Making Connections for Pacific Learners' Success
This ERO report discusses secondary schools where Pacific learners are achieving at or above the national norms for all students. It includes details of initiatives and good practice and how these work together to get great results.

Language Enhancing the Achievement of Pasifika: LEAP is a professional learning resource developed for teachers working in mainstream New Zealand classrooms with bilingual Pasifika students. It is designed for primary, intermediate/middle, and secondary teachers. 

NCEA and Literacy

The Government have confirmed the final change package for NCEA, following a comprehensive review of NCEA and  announcement of  seven changes in May 2019.

There are two changes to the original proposed package and they relate to strengthening NCEA’s literacy and numeracy requirements:

  • the new, more robust, literacy and numeracy assessment will be offered to students from Year 9 onwards, rather than from Years 7 and 8
  • in some cases, exceptions to a single literacy and numeracy benchmark qualification without any alternative pathways may be appropriate – particularly for students with English as their second language.

Although no changes to NCEA will be implemented in 2020, the Ministry has started work to progress the changes. We’ll be working alongside teachers and other experts from the education sector, through subject expert groups, to develop the new achievement standards and resources across all NCEA subjects – starting with Level 1. 

The full NCEA change package is available online.

  • Literacy Unit Standards Resources  - These resources have been developed to assist with the planning, implementation and assessment of the level 1 Literacy unit standards.
  • Implementing the literacy unit standards (Word 2007 26KB) - This report prepared by Trish Holden from UC Education Plus investigates how schools are implementing the literacy unit standards in 2011. The report identifies issues, responses from schools, positive aspects and considerations when implementing the standards.

 

Visualise this

Learning Outcomes | Teaching and Learning | Assessment and Evaluation | Learning Inquiry | Printing Version

Writers: Claire Amos and Hamish Chalmers
Curriculum Level: NCEA Level 2
Year Level: 12-13
Who are my learners and what do they already know? See  Planning using Inquiry

Learning Outcomes

(What do my students need to learn?)

How your school’s principles, values, or priorities will be developed through this unit
Curriculum achievement objectives (AOs) for:  
English

Level Seven:

Speaking, writing, and presenting

Processes and strategies

Students will:
Integrate sources of information, processes, and strategies purposefully, confidently and precisely to identify, form, and express increasingly sophisticated ideas.

By using these processes and strategies when speaking, writing, or presenting, students will:

Purposes and audiences
Show a discriminating understanding of how to shape texts for different audiences and purposes.

Ideas
Select, develop, and communicate sustained ideas on a range of topics.

Language features
Select and integrate a range of language features appropriately for a variety of effects.

Structure
Organise texts, using a range of appropriate, coherent and effective structures.

(Indicators have been removed from the above)

Achievement Standard(s) aligned to AO(s) 2.6 Create a Visual Text

Teaching and Learning

(What do I need to know and do to meet the range of identified learning needs of my students?)

Professional readings and relevant research

Effective Practices in Teaching Writing in NZ Secondary Schools 

Planning 

English Teaching and Learning Guide 

Assessment and Examination Rules and Procedures

Resourcing

This resource has been designed for students with access to computers both for designing the visual text and to view the video tutorials.

The planning templates in this resource link to google doc files and are also included in hard copy.

Learning task 1 - Deconstruction of visual text
Learning task 2 - From written text to visual text

Assessment and Evaluation

(What is the impact of my teaching and learning?)

Learning task 3 - Examine an exemplar
Learning task 4 - Choosing a themes focus
Learning task 5 - Including all the meaning (3-level guides)
Learning task 6 - A progression of ideas
Learning task 7 - Planning the panels
Learning task 8 - Sound and voice-over
Learning task 9 - Decide on the best tools

Learning Inquiry

This section includes questions that may aid teachers when reflecting on the students’ learning from this unit.
 

  1.  What do the students' choices around visual language techniques show about their understanding of how techniques can be used to effect audience?
  2.  What do the students' choices around visual language techniques show about their understanding of how effects can be utilised to communicate and develop ideas?
  3. What does the range of ideas students have communicated show about their understanding of what constitutes sustained ideas?
  4.  What do the students' choices around structural visual techniques (such as ordering, layout, and proportion) show about their understanding of how shaping texts communicates meaning?
  5.  How can the students’ understandings from this unit be linked to other units of work?

References:

Three Level Guide References

If you are not able to access the zipped files, please download the following individual files:

Deconstructing a visual text (Word 33KB)

Deconstructing a written text (Word 32KB)

Annotation for the exemplar (Word 33KB)

Planning a visual text (Word 42KB)

Planning a progression of ideas (Word 49KB)

The Deer Hunter assessment booklet (Word 67KB)

Storyboard template (Word 30KB)

Please contact Hamish Chalmers for any feedback or suggested changes.

Learners with special education needs

Special needs 1.

Responding to the needs and strengths of all students is one of the foundations of an inclusive classroom. In an English classroom, that may be as much about physical aids, such as digital technologies or extra personnel, as it is about differentiated pedagogy. The successful participation of special needs learners in English, involves a team response to individual needs – and participating at a suitable level often means academic success.

Suggestions for supporting students with special education needs in English include:

  • supporting vocabulary development through specific strategies such as modelling in different contexts, relating new words to existing vocabulary, using synonyms as well as examples and non-examples of words
  • explicit teaching of active listening behaviours
  • visual and touch cues to facilitate the development of speech-sounds
  • creating a language rich environment
  • strategies to support expressive communication, such as contingent responding, wait and signal, referencing and shaping
  • explicit teaching of phonemic awareness strategies, such as blending, segmenting and stretching
  • explicit teaching of reading strategies, such as skimming and scanning
  • use of comprehension strategies at the literal, inferential and applied levels
  • learning strategies for comprehension, such as summarising, story maps, semantic and graphic organisers
  • explicit teaching of spelling strategies, such as phonological, visual and morphemic strategies
  • instructional scaffolding for text types, such as flow charts, sentence starters and mind maps.

From  Supporting students in English with special education needs, NSW Education Standards Authority

There are a range of resources and readings to help us begin to understand and use appropriate pedagogies that will enhance learning for students with special needs, and all learners, when engaging with the English Learning area in The New Zealand Curriculum.

Questions to think about in your school context

  • What barriers to learning do students face in your classroom? How can you modify the environment to remove these? What technologies would support inclusion?
  • How can you create a flexible teaching and learning programme that allows all students to participate fully?
  • Are learning activities inclusive? Can students with differing backgrounds, experiences, levels of achievement, and abilities participate fully?

Examples

English HOD reflection – choices
An English teacher reflects on the impact online writing and collaborative tools have made to students' achievement in writing.

English HoD reflection – overview
The impact of one-to-one technologies on differentiation.

An inclusive learning environment supported by technology 
Renée Patete uses braille to read and write. In this video, Renee describes the difference technology makes to her learning by providing access to the curriculum and enabling ease of communication.

Through different eyes.

The Ministry of Education offers information about support for learners with special education needs.

Resources

The online dictionary of New Zealand Sign Language
A multimedia, multilingual reference tool. You can search by: English/Māori word, visual features of the sign and more.

Inclusive education: Guides for schools
This site contains a series of guides that provide New Zealand educators with practical strategies, suggestions, and resources to support learners with diverse needs.

These guides may be particularly useful: 

Gifted students with special learning needs (twice exceptional)

Twice exceptional.

Twice-exceptional (or 2E students) are sometimes also referred to as double labelled, or having dual exceptionality. These are gifted students whose performance is impaired, or whose high potential is masked, by a specific learning disability, physical impairment, disorder or condition. They may experience extreme difficulty in developing their giftedness into talent.

Gifted students with disabilities are at risk as their educational and social/emotional needs often go undetected. Educators often incorrectly believe twice-exceptional students are not putting in adequate effort within the classroom. They are often described as "lazy" and "unmotivated". Hidden disabilities may prevent students with advanced cognitive abilities from achieving high academic results. 2E students perform inconsistently across the curriculum. The frustrations related to unidentified strengths and disabilities can result in behavioural and social/emotional issues.

The  Twice-multi exceptional learners section on the Gifted Learners site will help you to understand the particular strengths and needs of twice/multi exceptional learners.

The Garden Party

Writer: Gayle Cattell

Summary
NCEA Level: 2 Duration: 8 weeks

Achievement standard being assessed

AS90376 (English 2.2):

  • Produce crafted and developed formal transactional writing.

Achievement standard 90376 assesses similar outcomes to unit standard 8825 [Produce transactional written text in complex forms]. Both standards require the same overall standard of writing to gain achievement [2.2] and credit [8825].

Even though the two standards assess similar outcomes, there are some differences in terminology. The term "conventions" is used in performance criteria 1.3 [8825] to mean style and structure. "Conventions" in the formal writing achievement standard refers to grammar, spelling, grammar, and punctuation.

The standard of technical accuracy required in 8825's pc 1.4: " Final product is crafted to publication standard" is identical to achievement level for 2.2 conventions criterion: "use writing conventions accurately."

Achievement criteria

  • Develop and support ideas in a piece of formal transactional writing
  • Craft writing to create effects that are appropriate to audience, purpose and text type
  • Structure material in a way that is appropriate to audience, purpose and text type
  • Use writing conventions accurately.

Language learning outcomes

  • Develop and craft transactional writing.

Curriculum links

This achievement standard is derived from English in the New Zealand Curriculum, Learning Media, Ministry of Education, 1994, up to and including Level 7.

Writing: Transactional Writing, Exploring language, Thinking critically, often with links to Processing information

Links to

Reading: Personal reading, Close reading

Speaking: Using texts

Listening: Listening to texts.

Guidelines for use

Students will describe an important character in the text and say either why the character is important (characterisation) OR how we learn about that character.

This unit can be taught in conjunction with AS 2.4 Read, study and analyse a number of short written texts. A suggested additional text is A Cup of Tea by Katherine Mansfield.

Conditions

The same conditions for assessment apply when assessing 8825 and the internally assessed writing achievement standard 90376 Produce crafted and developed formal transactional writing [2.2] - or any internally assessed unit or achievement writing standard at any level. Teachers must be satisfied that the work is the students'. Students should complete internally assessed writing work class. If the pieces are to be assessed for summative assessment, teachers should ensure that the extent of teacher input does not compromise assessment validity; in other words, the writing is the students', not the teachers'.

This is an internal assessment and as such should be worked on only in the classroom under teacher supervision. To ensure authenticity, students work should be held by the teacher between periods.

Teachers may guide students actively through the initial tasks helping them to identify techniques mentioned. Teachers may show how the techniques used in the exemplars can be applied to students' own writing.

As they develop drafts, teachers can advise students that their writing may need further work on ideas, language, structure or accuracy in spelling, punctuation or paragraphing but not correct errors. Students should have access to dictionaries to check their writing. Word processing is acceptable providing it is done under teacher supervision.

Consultation should occur with each student prior to the final submission. Students should have several opportunities during the year to develop their transactional writing skills. Students may use English language dictionaries, but not foreign language or electronic dictionaries.

NB: Teachers using this unit will need to check that it accords with their school assessment policy.

Teacher background reading

Teaching and learning activities

Learning task 1

Learning task 2

Assessment

Completion of this task to a satisfactory standard meets AS 2.2. Allow approximately four periods, but vary the time to suit student needs.

Refer to the conditions relating to internal assessment at the beginning of this unit and the TeacherInstructionSheet (Word 30KB) .

Students require the following for the assessment task: StudentInstructionSheet (Word 27KB) , The Garden Party Exemplar A achieved (Word 12KB) , The Garden Party exemplar B (Word 18KB) , and The Garden Party exemplar C (Word 16KB) Exemplar C  (16 kB), IdeasPage (Word 25KB) , DraftSheet (Word 19KB) , and AssessmentTaskSheet (Word 22KB) .

AssessmentSchedule (Word 50KB)

Resources

Print

  • Johnson, J., Stewart, M., Enright, P., and Reid, L. (2001). Sixth Form Certificate English. Singapore: ESA Publications (NZ) Ltd.
  • Stephens, J. (2003). AME NCEA Level 2 English Work Book Singapore: ESA Publications (NZ) Ltd
  • Mansfield, K. (1922). The Garden Party.

The big "C"

Writer: Margaret Johnson

Summary
NCEA Level: 2 Duration: 3 weeks

Unit standard being assessed

US 12420 Version 3

  • Read transactional written text closely.

Performance criteria

  • One main idea in the text is explained with reference to at least one relevant section of the text
  • The significance of a main idea in the text is analysed with reference to at least one relevant section of the text
  • Three examples of language features are identified using appropriate terminology, and each example is described in terms of its effect
  • A technique used to shape the text is identified and analysed with reference to at least one relevant section of the text.
 

Curriculum links

This unit standard is derived from reading language achievement objectives up to and including Level 7: close reading, exploring language, using texts, processing information, thinking critically.

While the subject matter in this Unit Standard may not at first appear to be relevant to ESOL students, it will be at least partly familiar to students who have studied Biology Level 1 Achievement Standard 90166 (Describe the functioning of human digestive and skeletomuscular systems). In this AS knowledge is required of some named malfunctions of the digestive system. One of these is bowel cancer. However it should be possible for other students to pick up the necessary information from the recommended texts.

Guidelines for use

  • Class time will be spent establishing prior knowledge, pre-teaching vocabulary and teaching language features and text structure.
  • Students will then read several texts, applying this knowledge.
  • This will be followed by formative and summative assessments. Students will complete ONE of the two required assessment activities for US 12420. Students will develop close readings of provided texts on the topic of cancer. Other texts with a similar focus could also be included as material for further close reading activities.

While tasks are supplied for some of the texts used, teachers will need to design tasks to activate prior learning and pre-teach vocabulary for each other new text chosen. Research has shown that making links with students' prior knowledge is vital to the learning process. Some suitable web pages to access for ideas on how to do this are:

  • KWL
    A chart where students list things they already know about the topic, what they want to know and what they have learned later in the topic.
  • Structured overviews
    These are an arrangement of keywords and concepts which can help to tie new information to existing knowledge.
  • Graphic organisers
    Graphic organisers can be used to record information that students already know about a topic.
  • There are several useful websites with strategies that can be used for pre-teaching vocabulary in the following website in ESOL online under Teaching strategies.
  • When pre-teaching vocabulary it is useful to include words from the Victoria University of Wellington Academic word list. These are words which students are likely to encounter at tertiary institutions.

Conditions

  • This activity requires both classroom and homework time.
  • Students should be given class time to become familiar with vocabulary and language features and aspects of text structure.
  • Closer analysis of other texts could be done in class or at home.

The first formative assessment is more scaffolded. For more information about scaffolding there is a useful article on the NCREL website about scaffolding. This assessment is a practice run so is an open book assessment done after some group work.

For summative assessment, teachers must be satisfied that the close reading work is the student's. Students should complete close reading activities in class. If the close reading activity is to be used for summative assessment, teachers should ensure that the extent of teacher input does not compromise assessment validity; in other words, the work is the student's, not the teacher's.

Teachers may guide students actively through the initial tasks. When completing close reading activities for summative assessment, students can compare their answers to those in the initial tasks to ensure that their close reading answers are at an appropriate level.

Students should have several opportunities during the year to develop their close reading skills.

Note: Teachers using this unit will need to check that it accords with their school assessment policy.

Teaching and learning activities

Learning task 1

Learning task 2

Learning task 3

Learning task 4

Assessment

This assessment is to be completed individually, in class and under exam conditions. It cannot be taken out of class.

SlayingDragons (Word 1MB)

See the AssessmentSchedule (Word 59KB) which is linked to the When they told me ... text indicating the level of answers required. Successful completion of this task will fulfil part of the range statement (one of two close readings) for the level 2 Unit standard 12420: Read transactional text closely.

Other texts (or text extracts) with a similar focus to texts included in this unit could also be included as material for a second close reading activity to complete the range statement for this unit standard. The questions could be adapted as required. A second close reading activity could also be completed using the Getting Around unit.

Fat tax

Writer: Gayle Cattell

Summary
NCEA Level: 2 Duration: 5 weeks

Unit standard being assessed

US 8825 Version 4:

  • Produce transactional written text in complex forms.

 Performance criteria

  • Writing develops idea(s)
  • Ideas are logically developed, sequenced, and supported by relevant details and/or examples
  • Conventions of chosen form are observed and are appropriate to the purpose of the writing
  • Final product is crafted to publication standard.

 Language learning outcomes

  •  Writing an argument.

Curriculum links

This achievement standard is derived from English in the New Zealand Curriculum, Learning Media, Ministry of Education, 1994, up to and including Level 7.

  • Writing: Transactional Writing, Exploring Language, Thinking Critically, often with links to Processing Information

with links to:

  • Reading: Personal Reading, Close Reading
  • Speaking: Using Texts
  • Listening: Listening to Texts

This unit also links to Food Technology, Home Economics and Health.

Guidelines for use

Students will will develop pieces of transactional writing arguing either for or against a fat tax on junk food. This unit could be used as a formative work for transactional writing. If it is used for summative assessment, students must ensure that none of the material in the exemplars [which are written on this 'Fat Tax' topic] is incorporated into their essays.

Conditions

The same conditions for assessment apply when assessing 8825 and the internally assessed writing achievement standard 90376 Produce crafted and developed formal transactional writing [2.2] - or any internally assessed unit or achievement writing standard at any level. Teachers must be satisfied that the work is the student's. Students should complete internally assessed writing work in class. If the pieces are to be assessed for summative assessment, teachers should ensure that the extent of teacher input does not compromise assessment validity; in other words, the writing is the students', not the teacher's.

This is an internal assessment and as such should be worked on only in the classroom under teacher supervision. To ensure authenticity, students work should be held by the teacher between periods.

Teachers may guide students actively through the initial tasks helping them to identify techniques mentioned. Teachers may show how the techniques used in the exemplars can be applied to students' own writing.

As they develop drafts, teachers can advise students that their writing may need further work on ideas, language, structure; or on accuracy in spelling, punctuation or paragraphing, but they may not correct errors. Students should have access to dictionaries to check their writing. Word processing is acceptable providing it is done under teacher supervision.

Consultation should occur with each student prior to the final submission. Students should have several opportunities during the year to develop their transactional writing skills.

Students may use English language dictionaries, but not foreign language or electronic dictionaries. Students should be fully aware of the process contained in the TeacherInstruction-summativeAssessment (Word 30KB) and familiar with the sheets needed to complete the task

NB: Teachers using this unit will need to check that it is in accord with their school assessment policy.

Teacher background reading

Teacher perceptions on the use and value of formative assessment in secondary English programmes.

Teaching and learning formative activities

Some suggested adaptations for lower ability students have been included in green either under this section or within the teacher instructions which can be found along with the task. The teaching/learning activities have been divided into preparing to learn at word and sentence level, preparing to learn at text level, and preparing to write (which includes a practice assessment task).

Preparing to learn at word level and sentence level

Task 1- Ask and Answer (Word 26KB)

  • Ask and answer is designed to link to students' prior knowledge and introduce the topic of junk food.

Phrases in Apposition task 2 (Word 417KB)

  • Practise writing definitions for 'junk food'.
  • After modeling how to make sentences more concise by using phrases in apposition, allow students to practise the examples given in the task.
  • Students may gain further practice by:
    • using dictionaries to find the meaning for obese and /or cholesterol
    • writing a definition
    • turning the definition into a phrase in apposition and completing the sentence.

Task 3- Exemplification Revision (Word 24KB)

  • A worksheet that shows students how to include examples in their sentences.

Quotes task 4 (Word 1,017KB)

  • Designed to help students integrate quotes into their writing.

Task 5 Free writing ( 40KB)

  • This task is a set of four free writing tasks designed to allow students to practise the sentence structures being explicitly taught.
  • The first exercise students include a quote, apposition and short sentence in their paragraph.

Task 6- Vocabulary (Word 135KB)

  • Use text "Push for Tax on Junk Food Sales".
  • The word find and a match the meaning activity for the above text contains only words from the academic word list. Strategies are included on the worksheet for handling unknown words.

Preparing to learn at text level

Task 7- Sentence Matching (Word 46KB)

  • Students match a sentence from the task sheet to a difficult sentence that has the same meaning from the text, to aid comprehension.

Task 8- True-False (Word 42KB)

  • Ask students to defend their answer of true or false by providing evidence from the text, thus encouraging verbal argument.

Task 9

  • Issue each student with a copy of "Push for Tax on Junk Food Sales". The teacher reads while students follow the story on their copies. It is suggested that you break the text into three parts or paragraphs. After each reading: clarify, question, summarise and predict similar to the reciprocal reading process, for example:
    • Ask students if they require any words clarified.
    • Ask if there are any questions about parts they don't understand.
    • Ask students to summarise what has happened

Preparing to learn at sentence level

Nominalisation task 10 (Word 2MB)

  • Explicitly explain the example on the worksheet before students complete the sheet.

Task 11 Free writing 2nd attempt (Word 40KB)

  • In the second exercise students include nominalisation, a question and a compound sentence in their paragraph.

Preparing to learn at text level

Task 12- Theme and Rheme (Word 45KB)

  • This worksheet was designed to prompt 'noticing' that the given information, unlike their own language, usually comes first in English sentence patterns.
  • Click above to go to the student worksheets, teacher instructions and the answers on this activity to help improve students' sentence structures.

Task 13- Free writing (Word 40KB)

  • In the third exercise, students include theme and rheme, exemplification and a complex sentence in their paragraph.

Task 14- Information Transfer (Word 24KB)

  • Give students a photocopy of information transfer sheet, which is a graphic organiser.
  • Using the text, "Push for Tax on Junk Food Sales", students complete the worksheet.
  • Check the answers, asking students to argue for the worth of each solution.
  • Students may present some new solutions which they could use in their essay.

Task 15- Information Transfer for an Argument (Word 24KB)

  • These are the arguments they will use in their essay.
  • Students should complete both for and against.

Task 16- Free writing (Word 40KB)

  • In the fourth exercise students may include those sentence structures which they need further practice with in their paragraph.

Preparing to learn about the genre of argument

Task 17- Text Reconstruction (Word 48KB)

  • Photocopy the essay page for each student, and make an OHT to project onto the whiteboard.
  • Cut up the essays into paragraphs before giving to students to reconstruct.
  • Students reconstruct the essay and glue it into their books. They should argue the reason for the placement order of the paragraphs, for example: "Put the strongest argument first."
  • Using the OHP, mark the language features as they are discussed on the whiteboard. Students paste on the speech boxes to label the parts.

Task 18-modality (Word 332KB)

  • Explicitly explain modals using the picture of the boat on the worksheet.
  • Complete each section of the worksheet explaining as necessary or students complete the sheet independently. Check the answers to question 1.

Cohesion-CauseAndEffect (Word 720KB)

  • Explicitly explain the examples on the worksheet.
  • Complete each section of the worksheet explaining as necessary or students complete the sheet independently. You may rove around the room checking answers as students complete the sheet.

Task 20- Argument Construction Squares (Word 33KB)

  • This activity is designed to re-introduce students to the structure of an argument.
  • Make an OHP of the argument deconstruction squares.
  • Discuss each square in relation to the modal answer.
  • As students find the different parts of the structure of an argument, they may highlight them.

Task 21- Cohesion - Linking Words (Word 33KB)

  • Students can complete the sheet for homework, or model how to fill the first gap and complete the worksheet in class.

Task 22- Writing Squares (Word 32KB)

  • The construction writing square activity focuses on providing the structure for an argument.
  • Students are given each square one at a time, and asked to write only one sentence on the back, except for the supporting evidence squares, where about ninety words is required. The teacher can roam providing assistance as required.
  • The question on the front of the square provides the prompt, and sentence starters provide further scaffolding.
  • From these squares students then write their first draft.

Task 23- Editing (Word 47KB)

  • A series of three peer editing tasks focussing on ideas, structure and language features are used in this activity to help students improve their essays.

Assessment

Independent writing

Assessment note

This activity can be used to assess one of the three pieces required for the transactional writing unit standard 8825. Unit standard 8825 assesses similar outcomes to achievement standard 90376 Produce crafted and developed formal transactional writing [2.2]. Both standards require the same overall standard of writing to gain achievement [2.2] and credit [8825]. Even though the two standards assess similar outcomes, there are some differences in terminology. The term "conventions" is used in performance criteria 1.3 [8825] to mean style and structure. "Conventions" in the formal writing achievement standard refers to grammar, spelling, grammar, and punctuation. The standard of technical accuracy required in 8825's pc 1.4: " Final product is crafted to publication standard" is identical to achievement level for the 2.2 conventions criterion: "use writing conventions accurately."

Resources

Print

  • Collerson, J. (1994). English Grammar: A Functional Approach Sydney, NESW: Primary English Teaching Association.
  • Derewianka, B. (2002). A Grammar Companion Sydney: NSW Primary English Teaching Association.
  • Knapp, P. and Watkins, M. (1994). Context -Text- Grammar: Teaching the Genres and Grammar of School Writing in Infants and Primary Classrooms Broadway. NSW: Text Productions.

Electronic

  • The New Zealand Herald. (2004). Push for Tax on Junk Food Sales.

Vocabulary

Vocabulary lists

A Teaching Resource for Using the Picture Dictionary for New Learners of English (446 kB) :This teaching resource introduces over 1,000 words widely used in the context of everyday life in New Zealand. It is available from teacher resource centres and selected bookshops. 

Nation, I. S. P., ed. (1996). Vocabulary lists
This resource lists vocabulary in terms of its frequency. It includes the first 1,000, second 1,000, third 1,000, and the University word lists developed by Paul Nation.

The Internet Picture Dictionary: Online multilingual picture dictionary designed especially for ESOL students.

Lextutor word lists This site has a set of diagnostic vocabulary tests, and a corresponding set of vocabulary lists linked to concordance, dictionary, and quizzes to help you explore the nuances of form, meaning, and collocation of the words on these lists.

Academic vocabulary

NCEA vocabulary:

Glossary of key words: The language of examinations and assessment tasks - a glossary of key words (Board of Studies New South Wales).

The '1000 Word Little Language' resource was produced by the English Language Institute at Victoria University. While teaching at Northcote College, Mary Matthew developed the examples and exercises, particularly with the group of Karen students from Burma/Myanmar in mind.

List 1

List 2

Readings 

Professional readings

  • Lexical exploitation of texts: Explains why students need to be trained to notice and learn chunks, rather than just individual words (British Council).
  • Vocabulary and autonomy: Activities to build students' abilities to explore, store and use vocabulary (British Council).

Seeing, storms and madness: King Lear

Students study several aspects of the King Lear, then plan and write essays on topics selected from previous NCEA papers.

Learning Outcomes | Teaching and Learning | Assessment and Evaluation | Printing Version

Writer: Mark Osborne
Year level 13
Who are my learners and what do they already know? See  Planning Using Inquiry
School curriculum outcomes How your school’s principles, values, or priorities will be developed through this unit

Learning Outcomes

 (What do my students need to learn)

Curriculum achievement objectives (AOs) for:  
English

Processes and strategies

Integrate sources of information, processes, and strategies purposefully, confidently, and precisely to identify, form, and express increasingly sophisticated ideas.


  • thinks critically about texts with understanding and confidence
  • creates a range of increasingly coherent, varied, and complex texts by integrating sources of information and processing strategies

Ideas

Select, develop, and communicate sustained and insightful ideas on a range of topics.


  • develops, communicates, and sustains sophisticated ideas, information, and understandings

Language features

Select, integrate and sustain a range of language features appropriately for a variety of effects.


  • uses a wide range of text conventions, including grammatical and spelling conventions, appropriately, effectively, and with accuracy.

Structure

Organise texts, using a range of appropriate, coherent, and effective structures.

  • organises and develops ideas and information for a particular purpose or effect, using the characteristics and conventions of a range of text forms with control.
Achievement Standard(s) aligned to AO(s) AS 90722 Respond critically to Shakespearean drama studied.

Teaching and Learning

 (What do I need to know and do?)

1-2 related professional readings or links to relevant research

Planning Using Inquiry

English Teaching and Learning Guide 

Learning task 1:

Learning intention(s)

Establishing prior learning and linking it to the text

KCs/ Principles/Values focus

KCs:

Thinking – explore texts

Relate to others – peer discussion

Learning task 1

Setting the scene

For background material about people in the Elizabethan age, see the following sites:

  1. New Approaches to Renaissance Studies A collection of images related to the renaissance. This will help to develop understanding of the context of the play. There are images of Whitehall, where the play was first staged on December 26th 1604. (Under the Court and Culture section).
  2. Summarise the Great Chain of Being in exactly 20 words, then identify which parts of the play, characters or decisions alter or work to corrupt it.
  3. Take a tour of the original Globe Theatre. Look at how rudimentary sets and theatres were and the fact that no complex effects were possible, meaning that Shakespeare could only rely on his language and stage action to keep people interested in the play.
  4. For background on sources for the play and a plot summary see Enjoying King Lear.

Pre-reading exercise

Read a picture book version of Cinderella to the class. Get students to construct a table identifying the elements that show us it is a fairy tale. At the end of the unit, go back and compare King Lear to Cinderella. Examine the similarities and the differences.

  • Cinderella
    A poor but honest protagonist
two wicked sisters
a fairy God-mother
distant time
  • King Lear
    A disinherited but honest protagonist
two wicked sisters
no fairy God-mother
pre-historic England

This establishes the context for the play. It conforms to some of these elements, but departs from them at significant points. (Where is the fairy God-mother to rescue Cordelia? Why do the good people die?)

Hand out the glossary to become familiar with Elizabethan English.

Learning task 2:

Learning intention(s)

Examining key text aspects

KCs/ Principles/Values focus

KCs:

Thinking – using a range of thinking strategies to build understandings

Relate to others – peer discussion

Learning task 2

Building plot understanding


As the class works through the text, complete the following questions, or, alternatively, use them to begin each class with a quiz revising the previous day's reading: plot quiz and plot quiz answers.

Character studies

King Lear

Photocopy the quotations and cut into cards: quotations. Put them in the correct order, as they occur during the play, then answer the following questions in relation to each quotation:

  • What does this quotation reveal about Lear?
  • How is it representative of his state of mind when he says it?
  • What other ideas do they connect with?

See related essays:

Analysis of King Lear

Cordelia

Print off the mutual dictation resources. Set up five mixed ability groups in the class and give each group one copy of one the full resource.

When combined, these handouts form a set of notes. Start with the group who has the first word on the page (in this case Group 1). One of the group members reads this word, which is copied down by each member of the class. This word is followed by the group that has the second word, and so on. Once somebody has read a word, they must pass the page to the person beside them. This ensures that everyone keeps up with the notes and that the groups are not dominated by one or two people. It sounds chaotic, but it works well. Students must concentrate on their listening skills as well. (It is not until the end of the exercise that the class actually realises they have written an entire page of notes.)

The Fool

Ask students to answer these questions based on the character of the Fool.

  • The Fool first appears in Act I scene iv.
  • How many times does Lear have to call for him before he comes?
  • How long has the Fool been absent?
  • What reason is given for his absence and what does this reveal about his character?
  • A lot of the Fool's intelligence is conveyed through his jokes and riddles. Find an example of a joke or riddle related to the following topics:
    • Brains
    • Crowns
    • Houses
    • Animals
  • What is the Fool trying to show Lear in each of these situations?
  • Why do you think the Fool does not appear again after Act III?

Minor characters

Read more about the character of Kent.

Characters in the subplot

Look at the following websites. Identify as many similarities and differences between the Lear main plot and the Gloucester subplot as you can.

Ultimately the purpose of including the subplot is to encourage us to view important ideas in different ways. After you have identified the similarities and differences, choose five of these and identify how they add to our understanding of the play, eg:

main plot / sub plot comparison

Main PlotSubplotImportanceLear has three legitimate daughters.Gloucester has one legitimate son and one illegitimate one.Evil is not confined either to gender or to being illegitimate. It can occur anywhere.

Learning task 3:

Learning intention(s)

Examining key text aspects

KCs/ Principles/Values focus KCs: Thinking – close reading

Learning task 3

Imagery

Complete the imagery resource In order to complete these activities, you'll need the complete text of the play. Use the "Find" feature, either in the web browser or a word processor, to locate various words and answer questions on how those words are used.

For a further discussion of theme and image patterns see:

Theme

Give students a copy of these theme notes. Split the class into small groups (3-4 students) Compile a list of key points about a chosen theme for distribution to the rest of the class. Choose part of a scene that illustrates aspects of the key points. Perform the scene for the class, and offer either a running commentary (stopping the action when required to expand on points they have made in the key point handout) or summarising the importance of the scene at the end of it. The finished product is a seminar, complete with excerpts from the play with a summarising handout.

Summary

Return to the pre-reading activity and identify the similarities between Lear and Cinderella. Discuss the differences between the two. Why is there no divine intervention/fairy God-mother? How would the play have changed if there had been?

Learning task 4:

Learning intention(s)

Drafting and polishing writing.

KCs/ Principles/Values focus

KCs:

Use language, symbols and texts – structure and express understandings about texts

Learning task 4

Developing an essay

  1. King Lear is prescribed Level 3 play until 2012. From 2013 with the introduction of the curriculum aligned standards at Level 3, there are no longer prescribed Shakespearean plays so that any play could be used for the new level achievement standard 3.2 Respond critically to specified aspect(s) of studied written text(s), using supporting evidence
  2. As formative work for AS 90722 Respond critically to Shakespearean drama studied, develop an essay on a topic linked to an aspect of learning tasks 2 or 3. In selecting a topic, it is vital that you select one suited to your understandings about it. As a first step in making a selection, consider the topics set.Talk with your teacher about the most appropriate topic for the learning completed in tasks 2 and 3. In selecting a topic, give preference to a topic in an paper from the last few years.
  3. Look at the 2008 exemplars which includes an achievement level exemplar on King Lear. Note that you should not use any material from this exemplar in your own essay. Additional exemplars are also available for this achievement standard by ordering the NZATE exemplar resource.
  4. Look over the Assessment Reports for AS 90722. As identified in the report, an excellence level response:
    • showed extensive knowledge of the play, and made apt references to critical works about the play
    • related understanding of the play to wider human issues, including modern-day events, to indicate a broader knowledge of themes
    • showed an awareness of both modern and Shakespearean audiences (placed the audience)
    • wrote fluently and accurately, often extensively
    • used high quality, academic language in their responses, with mature understanding of essay structure and logical sequencing of argument.
  5. Having selected a topic, develop an essay. Write at least 400 words. Support your ideas with specific details from your work in learning tasks 2 and 3.
  6. After completing a first draft, read your piece aloud to help identify parts of the writing that require reworking. Before writing a final version of your piece, proof-read it to improve on technical accuracy. Prior to writing the final draft, you should return to the exemplars to help reflect on whether any changes or additions are needed in your own final draft. You should also refer to the Assessment Schedule for AS 90722.

Preparing for AS90722 at the end of the year

Look back at the essay you developed earlier and use it to help prepare for the external standard. Don’t rote learn this essay then attempt to somehow adapt a learnt essay to a topic in the exam. You will be much better prepared if you familiarise yourself again with the text as well as its ideas and supporting evidence, then adapt your understandings and supporting evidence to fit the requirements of the topics set.

Learning task 5:

Learning intention(s)

Extending learning

KCs/ Principles/Values focus KCs: Thinking – explore texts

Learning task 5 – Additional Resources

King Lear

King Lear (television series). Directed by Michael Elliott with Laurence Olivier

King Lear (film). Directed by Peter Brook.

William Shakespeare: The Complete Works. This is a very comprehensive website with links to the complete works including background information, biographical information and pictures, information about Elizabethan theatres, a Shakespearean dictionary, the first folio, quotes, a quiz and a discussion forum.

How Sharper Than A Serpent's Tooth - A Lear Parody

General sites:

A nice summary of the play, characters, and themes and ideas

Shakespeare and the Theatre
The first known production of King Lear was at King James' palace at Whitehall on 26th of December 1606, but Shakespeare was also connected to the Globe theatre, a reconstruction of which now stands on the south bank of the Thames river in London.

Shakespeare Birthplace Trust
Educational resources, images and background information on Elizabethan society.

Much Ado About Something

Is it possible that William Shakespeare was the nom-de-plume of Christopher Marlowe, the 16 century English playwright? This site explores the evidence and the conflicting viewpoints.

Spark Notes

Essays

The Tragic Hero

Good vs. Evil

Assessment and Evaluation

 (What is the impact of my teaching and learning?)

Formative and/or Summative assessment task(s), including how will feedback be provided AS 90722 Respond critically to Shakespearean drama studied.

Provision for identifying next learning steps for students who need:

  • further learning opportunities
  • increased challenge

This piece of writing should be an integrated part of the year’s writing programme. Refer to

English Teaching and Learning Guide 

for more details.

Tools or ideas which, for example might be used to evaluate:

  • progress of the class and groups within it
  • student engagement

leading to :

  • changes to the sequence
  •  addressing teacher learning needs
See  Planning Using Inquiry

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