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Assessment tools

To judge the impact of teaching and learning, a range of assessment tools and procedures may be used.

  • Using evidence for learning: These pages address an essential component in the ongoing cycle of inquiry that is central to improving teaching and learning: the collection and analysis of high quality evidence.

Also: Assessment Online on TKI

Standardised tools

These tools have standardised procedures around their administration and many are norm referenced.

Dr Jane Davison's presentation covers interpretation of progress data from e-asTTle, using:

  • a range of comparisons that can be made depending on the evaluation question one asks
  • multiple perspectives on effect sizes and their interpretation
  • evaluative rubrics for interpreting accelerated student progress and achievement, and for inquiring into key drivers of student progress such as effective teaching, educational leadership and school culture, case management and implementation, and much more.

Observation-based procedures

These assessment processes/procedures are more flexible and variable assessment strategies designed to improve literacy teaching and learning. Such processes are part of the ongoing interaction between teaching and learning. Examples include informal and planned observation, teacher–student conferences, interviews and conversations.

Professional readings

This page provides a range of professional readings designed to support literacy development.

Literacy

Guidelines for integrating readymade commercial packages into teaching programmes: An evidence-based approach: These guidelines are based on research published in An evaluation of the use and integration of readymade commercial literacy packages into classroom programmes.

Lifelong Literacy: The Integration of Key Competencies and Reading: This NZCER report details research that explored how the key competencies might be integrated with the teaching of reading in the middle years of primary (years 3–6).

Learning from the Quality Teaching Research and Development Programme (QTR&D) – Findings of the External Evaluation

Thinking About How Language Works: This resource from the New Zealand Council for Educational Research (NZCER) provides teachers with additional information about language that will help them to analyse student responses to Assessment Resource Bank (ARB) items.

Motivating Literacy Learners in Today's World provides insights into a broad spectrum of children's literacy learning. Motivation is the key theme and the authors show how this can be achieved through reading for pleasure; in writing activities at a number of levels; and through oral language development.

Lifelong Literacy: The integration of key competencies and reading: This report presents the findings of a research project which explored how the key competencies described in The New Zealand Curriculum might be integrated with the teaching of reading in the middle years of primary school (years 3–6). The project involved researchers supporting teachers to conceptualise key competencies more deeply and design and implement reading programmes which integrate the competencies.

Should Transliteracy Replace Language Arts? Two viewpoints are shared by Patricia Russac and Jody Lambert.  One in favour of the need to move literacy into the technology age to prepare our students for their future, and the other arguing that students must first learn to read and write effectively before they can interact transliterally.  Both make very valid points in this five minute read.

Critical literacy

Planting Seeds: Embedding critical literacy into your classroom programme, Susan Sandretto, NZCER Press: Literacy once meant reading and writing words on paper. Today’s students need to be able to understand, use and critically analyse many different text types for different purposes in diverse contexts.

Sabbatical reports

Teaching and leadership strategies proven to enhance accelerated progress for priority learners in literacy.  Paul Grundy, Lucknow School. Sabbatical report, 2015

If "Daily Five" and "Cafe" reading has the potential to support diversity, connectedness and coherence in a New Zealand integrated curriculum and improve learning outcomes for all.  Sue Allomes, Terrace End School. Sabbatical report, 2015

Ways in which the progress of children who are achieving below what is expected of children in their cohort in writing can be accelerated.  Andrew Watson, Lumsden School. Sabbatical report 2014

Research reports

PIRLS 2021: COVID-19 Preliminary findings from the implementation of PIRLS in 2020 (published April 2022)
New Zealand took part in the fifth cycle of the Progress in International Reading Literacy Study, ‘PIRLS 2021’ in Term 4, 2020. PIRLS provides information on Year 5 students’ reading literacy/comprehension every five years.

Teachers as readers in New Zealand primary and intermediate schools (published 2021)
This exploratory study was carried out in 2021 by the New Zealand Council for Educational Research (NZCER) for the National Library of New Zealand Te Puna Mātauranga o Aotearoa. The project is part of a wider suite of six studies commissioned by the National Library as part of their Communities of Readers initiative.

2019

PISA 2018: Reading in New Zealand – Reading achievement and experiences of 15-year-olds (December 2019)
This report summarises the PISA 2018 reading achievement story in NZ and explores major contributors to student success in reading literacy, such as students’ reading habits and reading strategies, instructional methods and opportunities students are given to develop as readers, as well as digital reading practices.

He Whakaaro: How can teachers and whānau effectively teach and support reading? (December 2019)
This report is mainly based on major meta-analyses that have been conducted on how to teach reading, as well as some literature reviews and individual studies.

Curriculum integration: What is happening in New Zealand schools? (2019)
This report presents the findings from a research project on curriculum integration in New Zealand schools, carried out by NZCER in 2018–19. The purpose of the research was to explore teachers’ rationales for curriculum integration, the approaches and practices used to integrate curriculum, and the learning opportunities such approaches provide for students.

How does New Zealand's education system compare? OECD's Education at a Glance 2019 (published September 2019)
This summary report is an annual Ministry of Education publication designed to complement the release of the 2019 EAG. It contextualises and examines how New Zealand’s education system compares, noting areas where it performed above or below OECD averages.

Reading literacy instruction in English-language countries: similarities and differences (published August 2019)
Using data from PIRLS 2016, this paper presents a comparison of the instructional practices used by teachers in English-language countries and jurisdictions when teaching reading comprehension, drawing attention to the similarities and differences across them.

Keeping children engaged and achieving in writing (published June 2019)
This report shares some of the strategies and approaches used by schools who had focused on improving achievement in writing. It also shares some simple strategies used in classrooms where achievement in writing had been accelerated.

PIRLS 2016: Schools and School Climate for Learning (published May 2019)
PIRLS is an international research study designed to measure trends in the reading literacy achievement of middle primary school students every five years. PIRLS 2016 was the fourth cycle and was implemented in late 2015 and early 2016.

Exploring literacy: How six schools lifted achievement (published 2019)
How can schools support students to make progress in reading and writing? The project identified schools that have sustained positive achievement in literacy over five years, and asked what they did to achieve this.

2018

Massey University Early Literacy Research Project (published February 2018)
The purpose of this longitudinal research project was to improve the literacy outcomes of new entrant children during, and beyond, their first year of school.

Keeping children engaged and achieving through rich curriculum inquiries (published 2018)
This Education Review Office (ERO) report is one of a series of reports on teaching strategies that work. We asked leaders in each school what they saw as the reasons for their school's positive achievement trajectory and then investigated the teaching strategies that had been implemented, and the outcomes. This report shares some of the strategies and approaches used by schools that had focused on improving achievement through rich curriculum inquiries. It also shares some of the simple strategies used in classrooms where the inquiries had positively contributed to raising achievement in literacy and/or mathematics.

What drives learning in the senior secondary school? (published 2018)
This evaluation studies effective practice in schools’ senior curriculum. It contributes to the review being undertaken by the Ministry of Education (the Ministry) of the  National Certificate of Educational Achievement (NCEA). The Ministry-led review focuses on the implementation of NCEA as the national assessment system for the senior years of secondary schooling. 

Teaching strategies that work – Reading (published 2018)
This resource is the third in a series of reports derived from a national study of teaching approaches and strategies used in schools where there has been a significant increase in the number of students at or above the expected level in the upper primary school years (Years 5 to 8).

The importance of parents and caregivers (published 2018)
TIMSS assesses Year 5 maths and science skills and knowledge, and brings together background information from students, parents/caregivers, teachers and school leaders.

Understanding student attainment and progress (published 2018)
This paper describes why it is important for educators to understand and respond to both progress and achievement to enable children to maximise their potential. It summarises results from a new research dataset compiled by the Ministry of Education to illustrate the different insights that can be gained when looking at achievement relative to progress.

Achievement and progress in mathematics, reading and writing in primary schooling (published 2018)
Analysis of e-asTTle assessment data, 2011 to 2016. In order to support student learning it is important to continually improve our understanding of student achievement and progress. This project makes use of existing data to contribute to our current knowledge of student achievement and progress.

Evaluation of the Teacher-Led Innovation Fund: Final Report (published 2018)
The purpose of this evaluation was to provide timely and relevant information to: Inform continuous improvement of TLIF’s design, implementation and monitoring; Complement monitoring and review information sources to provide information about how the fund is operating; Expand the knowledge base about the nature of innovative teaching practice, collaborative inquiry, and mobilisation of new knowledge.

Responding to Language Diversity in Auckland (published 2018)
Auckland is New Zealand’s most culturally diverse city, with over 100 ethnicities and more than 150 languages spoken on a daily basis. This publication is based on the question, How are schools and early learning services in Auckland responding to this increasing cultural and language diversity?

2017


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Pasifika students, Pasifika cultural activities, and engagement with Pasifika families (published 2017)
This evaluation examines findings from the NZCER national survey of primary and intermediate schools 2016, which included a number of questions that asked specifically about matters related to Pasifika students, Pasifika families, or Pasifika cultural activities at school.

Teaching approaches and strategies that work (published 2017)
This evaluation looks at teaching approaches and strategies used in schools where there has been a significant increase in the number of students at or above National Standards in the upper primary school years (Years 5 to 8).

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What does an effective teacher of writing do that makes a difference to student achievement? (published 2017)
This article, based on an 18-month study of effective writing instruction amongst Year 5 to 8 students, concludes that effective implementation of three dimensions of effective practice (learning tasks; direct instruction; self regulation) are probable key levers in generating greater than expected learner gains in writing.

2014–2016

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Digital Technologies for learning: Findings from the NZCER national survey of primary and intermediate schools (published 2016)
This report looks at the role of digital technologies for learning in primary and intermediate schools. It draws on data from the NZCER National Survey of Primary and Intermediate Schools, which was conducted in late August and early September 2016. The survey asked how digital technology is being used, how it could be used, and what it means for teaching and learning.

TLRI Literacy report cover.

Literacy research that matters. A review of the school sector and ECE literacy projects (published 2015)
This is the second report in the Teaching and Learning Research Initiative (TLRI) Project Plus series. It looks at the 18 literacy-related projects in the early childhood and schools sector funded by the TLRI between 2003 and 2014. It considers what the community of researchers see as important in literacy teaching and learning, the problems to be tackled, the approaches taken and the new knowledge that has been built. 

Annual monitoring of reading recovery (published most recently 2016)
As part of the continuing evaluation of the implementation of Reading Recovery, schools with Reading Recovery are asked to provide information for the Ministry of Education on an annual basis. This information is used to examine trends in the delivery of Reading Recovery and the progress of students, and to assist the Ministry in developing policies regarding literacy.

Raising achievement in primary schools: ALiM and ALL (published 2014)
This national report is a companion report to Raising achievement in primary schools. It presents further findings of how some of the primary schools were using the Ministry-funded support projects – Accelerated Learning in Mathematics (ALiM) and Accelerated Learning in Literacy (ALL) to accelerate progress and raise achievement.

2012

Deliberate design: An analysis of the 2010–11 School Journals and Teacher Support Materials (published 2012)
This summary report was carried out by NZCER for Learning Media Ltd. 

Research evidence on reading for pleasure (published 2012)
The first section of this UK research highlights research evidence on reading for pleasure from domestic and international literature; exploring evidence on the trends and benefits of independent reading amongst both primary and secondary-aged children, as well as why children read. The second section covers the evidence on what works in promoting reading for pleasure.

Literacy learning in elearning contexts: Mining the New Zealand action research evidence (published 2012)
Academic researchers and teachers from early childhood education (ECE) centres, primary schools, and secondary schools worked collaboratively to re-examine data from archived action research inquiries in order to highlight how literacy learning can take place in e-learning contexts.

Making a difference to Pasifika student achievement in literacy (published 2012)
This research report explores classroom and school-related factors associated with improvements in the literacy achievement and progress of Pasifika students beyond expected levels in schools participating in the Literacy Professional Development Project (LPDP). It also identifies the nature of the professional development support that facilitated these outcomes.

2009–2011

PIRLS (progress in international reading literacy study) (published most recently 2011)
The Progress in International Reading Literacy Study (PIRLS) is a research project that provides information on the reading literacy of year 5 students.

Evaluation of Literacy and Mathematics Additional Learning Programmes for Students 2011 (published 2011)
This research report outlines the findings of an evaluation of the Literacy and Mathematics: Programmes for Students 2011, a Ministry of Education initiative to provide additional teacher time to enable selected schools to organise programmes for students who were assessed as ‘below’ or ‘well below’ the National Standards in mathematics, reading or writing. This initiative allowed a primary or intermediate school to design programmes in mathematics, reading or writing for a group of students to work intensively with a selected teacher.

Literacy teaching and learning in eLearning contexts (published 2011)
This report presents the findings of a research project on literacy teaching and learning in e-Learning contexts carried out by CORE Education and the New Zealand Council for Educational Research (NZCER) for the Ministry of Education in 2009.

Reading and writing in years 1 and 2 (published 2009)
The early years of primary school are a critical time for children. This is when they learn the reading and writing skills they need to engage with all aspects of The New Zealand Curriculum. When children start school, each child’s literacy experience and knowledge is different. How well this experience and knowledge is recognised and used in their education on a daily basis is, to a large extent, in the hands of their teacher.

Pre-2009

Literacy Professional Development Project: Identifying Effective Teaching and Professional Development Practices for Enhanced Student Learning (published 2007)
The Literacy Professional Development Project (LPDP) began in March 2004. The LPDP has a focus on improving teacher content knowledge in literacy, pedagogy and practice, and building effective professional learning communities. The project provides schools with an evidence-based professional development programme which aims to improve student learning and achievement in literacy.

Evaluation of the Literacy Professional Development Project (published 2007)

The Literacy Professional Development Project (LPDP) began in March 2004. The LPDP has a focus on improving teacher content knowledge in literacy, pedagogy and practice, and building effective professional learning communities. The project provides schools with an evidence-based professional development programme which aims to improve student learning and achievement in literacy.

Evaluation of the Home-School Partnership: Literacy Programme (published 2007)
This report provides an evaluation of the home-school partnership: literacy programme carried out in 2006–7 by the New Zealand Council for Educational Research (NZCER) for the Ministry of Education (MOE).

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An Evaluation of the Use and Integration of Readymade Commercial Literacy Packages into Classroom Programmes (published 2004)
This research identifies effective teacher practice for integrating commercially-produced readymade learning materials into classrooms to meet student learning needs. The research focused on practice with respect to literacy packages but the findings have resonance for other curriculum areas. The project investigated how low decile schools integrated five selected reading packages into their classroom reading programmes over two years, and identified effective practice around identifying and diagnosing student needs, selecting appropriate packages based on these needs, implementing the package and ongoing monitoring and evaluation. Sustainability was also considered.

Evaluation of the Literacy Leadership Initiative: The Enhancement Programme 2001 (published 2003)
The Literacy Leadership initiative was established in 2000 as part of the Ministry of Education's Literacy and Numeracy Strategy. The Enhancement Programme comprised professional development and support from a facilitator for principals and leading teachers of literacy to review their current literacy practices, and plan, implement and review a classroom initiative related to a goal for literacy improvement. This evaluation looked at evidence for student achievement in literacy as a result of the programme; necessary conditions for programme success; and school-based structures and processes supporting sustainable literacy improvement.

Pathways over the transition to schools: Studies in family literacy practices and effective classroom concepts for Māori and Pasifika children (published 2002)
Two outcomes of research and development are described in this report. One is the development of a set of resources suitable for family literacy education. The second is a set of research goals involving Māori and Pasifika families.

Picking up the pace (published 2002)
This research project delivered concentrated professional development in literacy instruction to groups of early childhood and new entrant teachers in decile one schools in Mangere and Otara. The outcome was a substantial lift in the reading and writing achievement of new entrants. Picking up the Pace was a component of the Early Childhood Primary Links via Literacy (ECPL) Project which was part of a much broader project, Strengthening Education in Mangere and Otara (SEMO), which aimed to raise achievement significantly among students in these two communities.

The Shawshank Redemption

Students study several aspects of the film The Shawshank Redemption, then plan and write about responses based on a selected aspect.

Learning Outcomes | Teaching and Learning | Assessment and Evaluation | Printing Version

Writer: Bridget Hildyard
Year level 12
Who are my learners and what do they already know? See  Planning Using Inquiry
School curriculum outcomes How your school’s principles, values, or priorities will be developed through this unit

Learning Outcomes

 (What do my students need to learn)

Curriculum achievement objectives (AOs) for:  
English

Processes and strategies

Integrate sources of information, processes, and strategies purposefully, confidently, and precisely to identify, form, and express increasingly sophisticated ideas.


  • thinks critically about texts with understanding and confidence
  • creates a range of increasingly coherent, varied, and complex texts by integrating sources of information and processing strategies

Ideas

Select, develop, and communicate sustained ideas on a range of topics.


  • develops, communicates, and sustains increasingly sophisticated ideas, information, and understandings

Language features

Select and integrate a range of language features appropriately for a variety of effects.


  • uses a wide range of text conventions, including grammatical and spelling conventions, appropriately, effectively, and with accuracy.

Structure

Organise texts, using a range of appropriate, coherent, and effective structures.

  • organises and develops ideas and information for a particular purpose or effect, using the characteristics and conventions of a range of text forms with control.
Achievement Standard(s) aligned to AO(s) 2.4 Produce a selection of crafted and controlled writing 
2.2 Analyse specified aspect(s) of studied visual or oral text(s), with supporting evidence

Teaching and Learning

 (What do I need to know and do?)

1-2 related professional readings or links to relevant research

Effective Practices in Teaching Writing in NZ Secondary Schools 

Planning Using Inquiry

English Teaching and Learning Guide 

Assessment and Examination Rules and Procedures

Learning task 1

Learning intention(s)

Establishing prior learning and linking it to the text

KCs/ Principles/Values focus

KCs:

Thinking – explore texts

Relate to others – peer discussion

Learning task 1

Pre viewing

  1. Look at the title of the film. What does it suggest? What is redemption?
    • Redemption (n) - The act of redeeming.
    • Redeeming (adj) - Serving to compensate for faults or deficiencies.
    • Redeem (vb) - 1. To recover possession of by payment of a price or service. 2. To convert (bonds or shares) into cash. 3. To pay off (a loan or debt). 4. To recover (something mortgaged or pawned). 5. To exchange(coupons) for goods. 6. To fulfil (a promise) 7. To reinstate someone's good opinion. 8. To make amends for. 9. To recover from captivity, esp. by a money payment.
      Taken from,
The Collins Pocket Dictionary, HarperCollins Publishers, England, 1989.
  2. Given that ‘Shawshank’ is the name of a fictional prison, what predictions can you make about the film based on the title ‘Shawshank Redemption'?

Viewing

  1. Use the viewing worksheet to complete responses to the film. Complete these questions as you are watching the film in the final 10 minutes of each viewing period.
  2. Discuss answers/ideas as a class. It can be a group activity, ie. each group takes a question and then reports back.
  3. Write a personal response to the film. Use such starters as, 'I enjoyed the film because...', 'I especially liked the scene where...', 'The character that remained in my mind was... because...', etc.

Learning task 2

Learning intention(s)

Examining key text aspects

KCs/ Principles/Values focus

KCs:

Thinking – using a range of thinking strategies to build understandings

KCs:

Thinking – explore texts

Relate to others – peer discussion

Learning task 2

Theme and character

Home and Expert Groups – Exploring Themes

  1. Divide the class into as many groups as there are in each group; for example, 5 groups of 5. These are the expert groups and each group will have one question to discuss (see below) so that they can then share ideas in detail. After discussing one question per expert group, new home groups are formed with one person from each of the expert groups. Each person in their home group must share their ideas on the one question they discussed in their expert group, so that everyone in their home group hears about each question.
    Expert Group Questions:
    • Explain the meaning of institutionalised. How does it apply to Brooks?
    • What aspect(s) of prison life are emphasised throughout the movie? Give examples.
    • Why does the Pacific Ocean have such appeal to Andy?
    • How do all the prisoners accept one another’s crimes in the prison? How is this significant?
    • List some examples of corruption of the legal process and the corrections process in the movie.
    • In what respects is justice finally achieved in the movie?
  2. Following the home and expert group activity, in your home groups talk about the main issues or themes raised in this film. Your discussions might touch on some of the following themes:
    • Courage
    • Loyalty
    • The power of the mind vs the power of authority
    • Institutionalisation
    • Corruption
    • Justice/injustice
    • Freedom

Characters and Power

Talk about the power relationships between the various groups of characters in the film. These relationships can be divided in several ways:

  • Prisoners vs Guards - Where the guards have the legal and perceived power
  • Andy vs Norton - Andy has the 'real' power ie; his intellect and inner strength
  • The Sisters vs Other Prisoners - The sisters have physical power (in numbers) but Andy has the power to fight them mentally
  • The Prisoners vs the Outside World - The prisoners lose their power to fear of the unknown
  • Norton/Hadley vs The Law - Ironic that these characters who are perceived 'upholders' of the law are more corrupt that some prisoners

Talk about other power relationships in the film. Draw diagrams to show power structures, such as the external power of the authorities vs inner power of the prisoners.. Talk about how would you define power in the movie.
Write a response about what you regard as a key theme raised in the film, including comment on the social value of the film's message.

Characterisation and Contrast

How are characters revealed? We find out what a character is like through what they say, do, what others say, physical appearance, relationships and so on. We can further explore character by looking at contrasts with other characters which can be developed through symbolism. For example:

  • Andy is often outdoors, in full sunshine. He wears the prisoners uniform of light blue and is often associated with music. All of these things reinforce the fact that he is a good person, someone who belongs in wide open spaces not shut up in a dingy prison.
  • Norton on the other hand is always dressed in dark colours. He is usually seen indoors in a shadowy environment and it is he who punishes Andy for playing music. Immediately we can see the contrast being set up here, the 'good' character vs the 'bad' character. It is ironic also that at the end of the film it is Andy who gains freedom and Norton who recedes in to the final darkness of death, thus the contrast that has been evident throughout is emphasised.

Choose two characters and to compare and contrast them in terms of imagery, appearance, relationships and roles in the film.

Learning task 3

Learning intention(s)

Examining key text aspects

KCs/ Principles/Values focus

KCs:

Thinking – close reading

Learning task 3

Film techniques

  1. Talk about the film terms resource.
  2. Look at how the setting is conveyed. View the 'introduction to Shawshank' scene where we first see the prison. How is the prison made to appear large, imposing and bleak? Look particularly at the shot selection, colour and music:
    • Crane shot shows us the prison from a bird’s eye view, sweeping views establish and emphasise the prison's size.
    • The music is slow, played by strings and has a deep drawn out bass which adds to the feeling that this is a place of sadness.
    • The colours are bleak. Prisoner's uniforms are grey (as is the sky) and the lighting is dull.
    • We see the prison through Andy's eyes as he enters. Moves from a low angle of the entrance to an undershot which gives the impression that he is entering a place of misery and will not emerge for a long time. Again the sheer size of the place is shown in an imposing way.
    • Inside the prison it is dark, lit only by natural light from the windows. This creates long shadows which give an eerie, cold feeling and we get the suspicion that all is not as it should be, shadows hide secrets.

Close viewing

  1. View the following scenes again and talk about the related questions:
    • What shot is used when Andy is given his sentence by the judge? Explain the intended effect.
    • A point of view shot is used when we view a scene through a character's eyes. Identify and explain the effect at least two point of view shots used during the prisoners' arrival scene.
    • What angle is used when Andy is about to be pushed over the edge of the building? Explain the intended effect.
    • Explain how light has been used effectively in Brooks's leaving scene.
  2. Complete a scene analysis when Andy crawls out of the drain pipe to freedom. Look at how music, sound effects, lighting, shot selection and sequence are combined to create effects. Think about how these components contribute to the atmosphere.

Learning task 4

Learning intention(s)

Drafting and polishing writing.

KCs/ Principles/ Values focus

KCs:

Use language, symbols and texts – structure and express understandings about texts

Learning task 4

Developing a piece of formal writing

  1. Develop a piece of formal writing on a topic linked to an aspect of learning tasks 2 or 3. In selecting a topic, it is vital that you select one suited to this text and to your understandings about it. As a first step in choosing a topic, consider the topics set for the externally assessed standard 90379 Analyse a visual or oral text. Talk with your teacher about the most appropriate topic for the learning completed in tasks 2 and 3. In selecting a topic, give preference to a topic in an paper from the last few years.
  2. This writing can be included as part of your folio. In 2011, it can be assessed during your class programme against Achievement Standard 90376: Produce crafted and developed formal transactional writing. From 2012, it can be assessed against its replacement, the new Level 2 writing standard, AS 2.4 Produce a selection of crafted and controlled writing. The same standard of writing is required at each achievement level for both the old and new achievement standards.
  3. At the end of 2011, your writing can also become part of preparing for the externally assessed AS 90379 Analyse a visual or oral text. In 2012, this standard is replaced by AS 2.2 Analyse specified aspect(s) of studied visual or oral text(s), with supporting evidence. Both these standards assess comparable outcomes: analyse specified aspect(s) of studied visual or oral text(s), with supporting evidence.
  4. Look at to the assessment schedule and the relevant exemplars. These are for AS 90379 and were written under exam conditions. Note that the achievement exemplar [The Piano] requires attention to style, syntax and text conventions before it would meet the second criterion [craft controlled writing] for the new AS 2.4 [and AS 90376]. However, it provides an indication of the level required to meet the first AS 2.4 criterion [develop, sustain and structure ideas]. The merit [Alive] and excellence [Into the Wild] exemplars meet all criteria for the writing standards. Additional exemplars are available for this achievement standard by ordering the NZATE exemplar resource.
  5. Look over the Assessment Reports for AS 90379. An excellence level response:
    • includes a stated hypothesis in the introduction which was developed and referred back to throughout the response
    • constructs a fully developed argument, with integrated pertinent quotations and evidence.
    • provides a well thought out concluding statement.
  6.  Having selected a topic, craft a piece of formal writing. Write at least 500 words. Support your ideas with specific details from The Shawshank Redemption from your work in learning tasks 2 and 3..
  7. After completing a first draft, read your piece aloud to help identify parts of the writing that require reworking. Before writing a final version of your piece, proof-read it to improve on technical accuracy. Prior to writing the final draft, you should return to the exemplars to help reflect on whether any changes or additions are needed in your own final draft. You should also refer to the assessment schedule.

Preparing for the external standard 90379: Analyse a visual or oral text; or from 2012, Analyse specified aspect(s) of studied visual or oral text(s), with supporting evidence

  1.  Look back at the formal writing piece you developed earlier and use it to help prepare for the external standard. Don’t rote learn this essay then attempt to somehow adapt a learnt essay to a topic in the exam. You will be much better prepared if you familiarise yourself again with the text as well as its ideas and supporting evidence, then adapt your understandings and supporting evidence to fit the requirements of the topics set.

Assessment and Evaluation

 (What is the impact of my teaching and learning?)

Formative and/or Summative assessment task(s), including how will feedback be provided

In 2011:
90376: Produce crafted and developed formal transactional writing
90379: Analyse a visual or oral text

From 2012:
2.4 Produce a selection of crafted and controlled writing 
2.2 Analyse specified aspect(s) of studied visual or oral text(s), with supporting evidence

Provision for identifying next learning steps for students who need:

  • further learning opportunities
  • increased challenge

This piece of writing should be an integrated part of the year’s writing programme.

English Teaching and Learning Guide 

Conditions of Assessment Guidelines for oral presentations.

Effective Practices in Teaching Writing in NZ Secondary Schools

Tools or ideas which, for example might be used to evaluate:

  • progress of the class and groups within it
  • student engagement

leading to :

  • changes to the sequence
  • addressing teacher learning needs
See:  Planning using Inquiry

Printing this unit:

If you are not able to access the zipped files, please download the following individual files.

Resources

Text Selection Guidelines

One of the most important tasks for teachers is to select appropriate texts to use with their students. The instructional texts provided by the Ministry of Education, such as the School Journal, include information about their reading year levels.

The guidelines will help teachers with such texts. They include an easy-to-use framework designed to help teachers estimate the difficulty of texts from many sources.

Framework

The framework provides both a process for estimating the difficulty of a text and a record of the supports and challenges it presents to the students. Download the framework template to use to help you estimate the difficulty of a text.

Planning for Writing Across the Curriculum – Literacy Planners

Teaching and learning resources

  • Literacy Online, English Online and ESOL Online: these three websites have been developed as the overarching resource to support leaders and teachers enhance teaching and learning, and in particular ensure that all students have the literacy and English language skills required to meet the demands of the NZ Curriculum.
  • Literacy Learning Progressions: the Literacy Learning Progressions support literacy teaching and learning by describing the knowledge and knowledge and skills students need to meet the reading and writing demands of the curriculum. Teachers can use them to identify where their students are now and where they need to be if they are to engage successfully with the curriculum at their level.
  • English Language Learning Progressions (ELLP): This resource describes a typical pathway to English language acquisition, enabling teachers to track and monitor the progress of students who are acquiring English as an additional language. The extraordinary diversity of English language learners means that they will have many different starting points for their learning. The intention is that all students whose progress has been mapped on the ELLP will eventually be ready to have it mapped on the LLP.
  • Sounds and Words: Sounds and Words is an online resource intended to help teachers of students in years 1 to 8 provide instruction in phonological awareness and spelling.
  • Making Language and Learning work (DVDs): These DVDs provide practical examples of how teachers can effectively integrate content-area teaching and language learning. Schools can use the accompanying facilitation notes to support the design of in-school professional development.
  • Effective Literacy Practice in years 1–4; and Effective Literacy Practice in years 5–8: These handbooks identify and describe the features of literacy teaching, at the respective year levels, that are clearly linked by research to improved outcomes for students. They are designed to help teachers to: build their professional knowledge; become more aware of what makes literacy teaching effective for students; become more strategic in their; examine their beliefs about themselves as teachers and about children as literacy learners; and see themselves as part of a professional learning community and reflect critically on their practice.
  • Language Enhancing the Achievement of Pasifika: LEAP is a professional learning resource developed for teachers working in mainstream New Zealand classrooms with bilingual Pasifika students. It is designed for primary, intermediate/middle, and secondary teachers. The resource includes information that may be useful for teachers of bilingual students from many backgrounds, although it has been developed for Pasifika.

Focusing inquiry: Know the learner

Learning about my students' needs

What is important (and therefore worth spending time on), given where my students are at? This focusing inquiry establishes a baseline and a direction. The teacher uses all available information to determine what their students have already learned and what they need to learn next.

Key questions

What do we know about each student's:

  • prior learning?
  • ethnicity/culture (Ko wai? No hea? - Who are you? Where are you from? eg. hapu/iwi/country of origin)?
  • linguistic background/languages spoken?
  • interests/hobbies/community involvement?
  • aspirations/goals (both student and whanau/community)?
  • skills, knowledge (including prior cultural knowledge) and understandings?
  • expected levels of progress in English?

Why are these questions important?

Our two national curriculum documents  The New Zealand Curriculum (NZC) and  Te Marautanga Aotearoa place the learner at the centre of teaching and learning. In order to effectively "attend to the cultural and linguistic diversity of all students" (NZC p34), teachers need to develop a rich knowledge and understanding of who their students are, what they bring with them, and their learning strengths and needs.

Teachers as Learners: Improving Outcomes for Māori and Pasifika Students through Inquiry
Seven case studies about teacher inquiry in New Zealand classrooms have been adapted as learning stories; these are included in this set of materials as springboards for thinking about the Teaching as Inquiry cycle, effective pedagogy, and cultural responsiveness and how they might connect to your own practice.

Teaching Secrets: When the Kids Don’t Share Your Culture 
An article from the New York Times which provides a number of practical ways to get to know students from different cultural backgrounds.

Back to top

Useful resources

Student Voice: Have we considered what our students would like from us? What helps them realise their potential? Read about encouraging student voice.

Making Language and Learning Work in Secondary Science and Maths: Know the Learner

Where can I find out more?

  • Ethnicity data from your Student Management System
  • Student achievement data derived from, for example:
  • Information from contributing schools, and, where relevant, ESOL department and RTLB
  • The Literacy Learning Progressions describe the specific literacy knowledge, skills, and attitudes that students draw on in order to meet the reading and writing demands of the curriculum.

Professional readings

Subject Area: Literacy

  • Adolescent Literacy: An updated position statement from the International Reading Association, offered as a guide for supporting adolescents’ ongoing literacy development. This document builds on the 1999 statement in an effort to align the tremendous growth in the field of adolescent literacy, and outline what adolescents deserve.
  • Adolescent Literacy: Engaging Research and Teaching (ALERT): News alert from Literacy Gains website in Ontario that focuses on enabling students to pose and pursue their own questions. Literacy GAINS is an Ontario based website focusing on building individual and collective capacities to improve literacy learning and teaching in Ontario. This link offers 3 PDF documents which highlight research into how to Enable Students to Pose and Pursue their own Questions, Making Room for Talking to Learn and Necessary for Some: How to Help Students Who Struggle with Reading
  • Developing high impact teaching and leadership strategies for improved student outcomes.
    Presented by Stuart McNaughton and Aaron Wilson from the Woolf Fisher Research Centre, Faculty of Education, The University of Auckland. Four critical literacy questions for school leaders and teachers were addressed and discussed:
    • Why is subject area literacy important?
    • What do we need to know about effective literacy teaching?
    • What do we know about how to change?
    • What don’t we yet know?
  • McDonald, T., Thornley, C., (2009) Critical literacy for academic success in secondary school: Examining students’ use of disciplinary knowledge. Critical Literacy: Theories and Practices 3 (2), 56-68. 
  • Networked inquiry learning in secondary science classrooms: This research project aimed to understand and explore the ways electronically networked (e-networked) tools can support authentic science inquiry in junior secondary classrooms in order to address concerns about student engagement in science.
  • Reading in the Disciplines: The Challenges of Adolescent Literacy’. Carnegie Corporation, New York. (2010)
     This report outlines the challenges of adolescent reading, particularly in Science, History, Mathematics and Literature. Also included is a focus on discipline-specific reading strategies alongside generic strategies.
  • ReadingNext (PDF 2MB)  This report to Carnegie Corporation of New York - A vision for Action and Research in Middle and High School Literacy, delineates fifteen elements aimed at improving middle and high school literacy achievement right now.

Reference list for Secondary Literacy

A reference list compiled for the Secondary Literacy Project

Print resources

Alvermann, D. E. (2002). Effective literacy instruction for adolescents. Journal of Literacy Research, 34(2), 189-208.

Braunger, J., Donahue, D. M., Evans, K., Galguera, T., & Schoenbach, R. (2004). Rethinking preparation for content area teaching: The reading apprenticeship approach: Jossey-Bass

Conley, M. W. (2008). Cognitive strategy instruction for adolescents: What we know about the promise, what we don't know about the potential. Harvard Educational Review, 78(1).

Denti, L., & Guerin, D. (2004). Confronting the problem of poor literacy:Recognition and action. Reading and Writing Quarterly, 20(2), 113-122.

Denti, L., Guerin, D., & Guerin, G. R. (2007). Effective Practice for Adolescents with Reading and Literacy Challenges: Routledge.

Deshler, D. D., Palincsar, A. S., Biancarosa, G., & Nair, M. (2007). Informed choices for struggling adolescent readers: A research-based guide to instructional programs and practices. New York: International Reading Association.

Fisher, D., & Ivey, G. (2005). Literacy and language as learning in content-area classes: A departure from" every teacher a teacher of reading". Action in Teacher Education, 27(2), 3.

Greenleaf, C. L., Schoenbach, R., Cziko, C., & Mueller, F. L. (2001). Apprenticing adolescent readers to academic literacy. Harvard Educational Review 71(1), 79-129.

Hall, L. A. (2005). Teachers and content area reading: Attitudes, beliefs and change. Teaching and Teacher Education, 21, 403-414.

Harvey, C., & Glenn, J. (2007). NCEA Analysis for Teaching and Learning. Auckland, New Zealand: Team Solutions.

Hiebert, E. H., & Kamil, M. L. (2005). Teaching and learning vocabulary: Bringing research to practice: Lawrence Erlbaum.

Lai, M. K., McNaughton, S., Amituanai-Toloa, M., Turner, R., & Hsiao, S. (2009). Sustained Acceleration of Achievement in Reading Comprehension: The New Zealand Experience. Reading Research Quarterly, 44(1), 30-56.

May, S. (2006). Secondary Schools’ Literacy Initiative (SSLI): Summary of Key Findings

May, S., & Wright, N. (2007). Secondary literacy across the curriculum: Challenges and possibilities. Language and Education, 21(5), 370-376.

McDonald, T., & Thornley, C. (2005). Literacy teaching and learning during the secondary years: Establishing a pathway for success to NCEA and beyond. SET: Research Information for Teachers, 2, 9–14.

McDonald, T., & Thornley, C. (2006). Summary of Findings from the evaluation of the Effective Literacy Strategies: Pasifika Focus professional development project. Retrieved from www.tki.org.nz/r/literacy_numeracy/pdf/effective-literacy-strategies-pasifika-focus.pdf.

McNaughton, S. (2002). Meeting of minds. Wellington, New Zealand: Learning Media.

McNaughton, S., & Lai, M. K. (2009). A model of school change for culturally and linguistically diverse students in New Zealand: a summary and evidence from systematic replication. Teaching Education, 20(1), 55-75.

Moje, E. B. (2008). Responsive literacy teaching in secondary school content areas. In M. W. Conley, J. R. Freidhoff, M. B. Sherry & S. F. Tuckey (Eds.), Meeting the Challenge of Adolescent Literacy: Research We Have, Research We Need. New York: The Guilford Press.

Moje, E. B., & Speyer, J. (2008). The reality of challenging texts in high school science and social studies. In K. A. Hinchman & H. K. Sheridan-Thomas (Eds.),Best Practices in Adolescent Literacy Instruction. New York: The Guilford Press.

O'Brien, D. G., Stewart, R. A., & Moje, E. A. (1995). Why content literacy is difficult to infuse into the secondary school: Complexities of curriculum, pedagogy, and school culture. Reading Research Quarterly, 30(3), 442-463.

Pressley, M. (2004). The need for research on secondary literacy education. In T. L. Jetton & J. A. Dole (Eds.), Adolescent Literacy Research and Practice (pp. 415). New York: The Guilford Press.

Schoenbach, R., Greenleaf, C., Hurwitz, L., & Cziko, C. (1999). Reading for understanding: A guide to improving reading in middle and high school classrooms: Jossey-Bass.

Shanahan, T., & Shanahan, C. (2008). Teaching disciplinary literacy to adolescents: rethinking content-area literacy. Harvard Educational Review, 78(1), 40-59.

Siebert, D., & Draper, R. J. (2008). Why content-area literacy messages do not speak to mathematics teachers: A critical content analysis. Literacy Research and Instruction, 47(4), 229-245.

Snow, C. E., & Biancarosa,G. eds. Adolescent Literacy and the Achievement Gap: What Do We Know and Where Do We Go From Here? Carnegie Corporation of New York Adolescent Literacy Funders Meeting Report. New York: Carnegie Corporation of New York, 2003.

Tatum, A. W. (2008). Toward a more anatomically complete model of literacy instruction: A focus on African American male adolescents and texts. Harvard Educational Review, 78(1), 155-180.

Thornley, C., & McDonald, T. (2002). Reading across the curriculum: Secondary school students talk about themselves as readers. SET: Research Information for Teachers, 1, 19-24.

Walqui, A. (2006). Scaffolding instruction for English language learners: A conceptual framework. International Journal of Bilingual Education and Bilingualism, 9(2), 159-180.

Wray, D., & Lewis, M. (1997). Teaching factual writing: Purpose and structure. Australian Journal of Language and Literacy, 20(2).

Wright, N. (2007a). Building literacy communities of practice across subject disciplines in secondary schools. Language and Education, 21(5), 420-433.

Wright, N. (2007b). Teacher leadership: Refocusing pedagogy through literacy. New Zealand Journal of Educational Leadership, 22(2), 1-12.

Focusing inquiry: Know the learner

Learning about my students' needs

What is important (and therefore worth spending time on), given where my students are at? This focusing inquiry establishes a baseline and a direction. The teacher uses all available information to determine what their students have already learned and what they need to learn next.

Key questions

What do we know about each student's:

  • prior learning?
  • ethnicity/culture (Ko wai? No hea? - Who are you? Where are you from? eg. hapu/iwi/country of origin)?
  • linguistic background/languages spoken?
  • interests/hobbies/community involvement?
  • aspirations/goals (both student and whanau/community)?
  • skills, knowledge (including prior cultural knowledge) and understandings?
  • expected levels of progress in English?

Why are these questions important?

Our two national curriculum documents  The New Zealand Curriculum (NZC) and  Te Marautanga Aotearoa place the learner at the centre of teaching and learning. In order to effectively "attend to the cultural and linguistic diversity of all students" (NZC p34), teachers need to develop a rich knowledge and understanding of who their students are, what they bring with them, and their learning strengths and needs.

Teachers as Learners: Improving Outcomes for Māori and Pasifika Students through Inquiry
Seven case studies about teacher inquiry in New Zealand classrooms have been adapted as learning stories; these are included in this set of materials as springboards for thinking about the Teaching as Inquiry cycle, effective pedagogy, and cultural responsiveness and how they might connect to your own practice.

Teaching Secrets: When the Kids Don’t Share Your Culture 
An article from the New York Times which provides a number of practical ways to get to know students from different cultural backgrounds.

Back to top

Useful resources

Student Voice: Have we considered what our students would like from us? What helps them realise their potential? Read about encouraging student voice.

Making Language and Learning Work in Secondary Science and Maths: Know the Learner

Where can I find out more?

  • Ethnicity data from your Student Management System
  • Student achievement data derived from, for example:
  • Information from contributing schools, and , where relevant, ESOL department and RTLB
  • The Literacy Learning Progressions describe the specific literacy knowledge, skills, and attitudes that students draw on in order to meet the reading and writing demands of the curriculum.

The rotten state of Denmark - a study of Shakespeare's Hamlet

Students explore how immoral and corrupt influences at the heart of court life in Elsinore underpin many aspects of the play. They then present seminars and write essays based on their studies.

Learning Outcomes | Teaching and Learning | Assessment and Evaluation | Printing Version

Writer: Karen Melhuish
Year level 13
Who are my learners and what do they already know? See  Planning using Inquiry
School curriculum outcomes How your school’s principles, values, or priorities will be developed through this unit

Learning Outcomes

 (What do my students need to learn)

Curriculum achievement objectives (AOs) for:  
English

Processes and strategies

Integrate sources of information, processes, and strategies purposefully, confidently, and precisely to identify, form, and express increasingly sophisticated ideas.


  • thinks critically about texts with understanding and confidence
  • creates a range of increasingly coherent, varied, and complex texts by integrating sources of information and processing strategies

Ideas

Select, develop, and communicate sustained and insightful ideas on a range of topics.


  • develops, communicates, and sustains sophisticated ideas, information, and understandings

Language features

Select, integrate and sustain a range of language features appropriately for a variety of effects.


  • uses a wide range of text conventions, including grammatical and spelling conventions, appropriately, effectively, and with accuracy.

Structure

Organise texts, using a range of appropriate, coherent, and effective structures.

  •  organises and develops ideas and information for a particular purpose or effect, using the characteristics and conventions of a range of text forms with control.
Achievement Standard(s) aligned to AO(s) AS 90725 Construct and deliver an oral presentation

Teaching and Learning

 (What do I need to know and do?)

1-2 related professional readings or links to relevant research

Planning using Inquiry

English Teaching and Learning Guide 

Assessment and Examination Rules and Procedures

Learning task 1:

Learning intention(s)

Examining key text aspects

KCs/ Principles/Values focus

KCs:

Thinking – explore texts

Relate to others – peer discussion

Learning task 1

Act 1

By the end of their study of Act 1, you should appreciate that Claudius' crimes (fratricide, regicide) plus his usurpation and 'incestuous' marriage mark him as the protagonist of the immorality in the court. Hamlet must engage with Claudius to confront this corruption, and in doing so, he must confront his own perceived inadequacies. Other characters' lack of trust, the presence of the ghost and the concept of revenge are all evidence that something is indeed rotten in the state of Denmark. The frequent use of imagery related to disease, dungeons and weeds is an important indicator of this theme and should be noted as it occurs.

  1. Begin by introducing this theme through discussion of the details in Act 1 Scene 1, such as the omen of the ghost, the time of night, the chill in the air, the forebodings of the soldiers in a time of war and disorder.
  2. Before reading the first scene, watch the opening scenes of the play on video, up to the ghost's first appearance (end of scene 1). Mel Gibson provides a good version (although it is not completely faithful to the actual order of the text). Discuss with the class how the uneasy mood and atmosphere is conveyed in the film version.
  3. Complete a dramatic reading of Act 1 Scene 1 in class. Perhaps warm up the reluctant readers with a quick game of wink murder or any other good warm-up games. Continue the discussion about which details in the plot and language in the first scene create a sense that all is not well in Denmark. Compare with the video version which you saw earlier.
  4. Now complete a full reading of the entire Act in class, focusing initially on the basics of plot, who's who etc. so that you can grasp the basic story as it unfolds. Online study guides for the play can be useful at this point, plus a prose version of the play. Ideas for activities that might enliven class readings include:
    • Individuals taking key roles
    • Performances of key moments in small groups
    • Freeze frames created by small groups of key moments
    • Intersperse video clips of key moments
    • Prepared readings - allocate key speeches to prepare for homework to read/perform the next lesson
    • Rex Gibson has many other great ideas in his teachers' book
  5. Take a closer look at the character of Claudius using worksheet 1 - split the class into two - one side takes the 'positives' as listed on the sheet, the other side the 'negatives' - to gather both positive and negative points about his behaviour from Act 1, scenes 2, 4 and 5. Each group then feeds back to the class. Gather comments on the board.
  6. In pairs explore Hamlet's feelings of disillusionment which so frequently inform the uneasy atmosphere at court. You should closely analyse the language of his soliloquy using worksheet 2; this is also a good opportunity to look at the finer points of iambic pentameter, imagery, connotative language and the dramatic function of class soliloquies.
  7. Research the following background topics in small groups to then feedback to the class; provide an oral summary of these background notes for other students and explain how the information on these topics is relevant to the events and ideas of corruption in Act 1 of the play:

Learning task 2:

Learning intention(s)

Examining key text aspects

KCs/ Principles/Values focus

KCs: Thinking – explore texts

Relate to others – peer discussion

Learning task 2

Act 2

By the end of their study of Act 2, you should appreciate that the court is peopled with other characters who, like Claudius, contribute to the atmosphere of corruption and mistrust in the play. Others, such as Ophelia and Hamlet, are caught up in the chaos that has resulted from Claudius' original actions.

  1. Read through the Act as a class and establish key plot events. Continue to use the video or activities as suggested for Act 1 as support, if time allows.
  2. Divide class into three to focus on Polonius, whose sycophancy and mistrust of his children contributes to the deceit and moral corruption of the court. Each group looks at one of the aspects of Polonius' behaviour towards one of the following: Claudius, Laertes, Ophelia, as shown on worksheet 3. Gather their comments on the board.
  3. Motif of spying and deceptive appearances:list the occurrences of spying so far in the play. As a class, discuss how it adds to the claustrophobic, deceitful mood -and hence the theme of corruption - at court. Update the list of examples of spying as the play continues.
  4. Motif of madness: Discuss how various actors from the Royal Shakespeare Company have portrayed Hamlet's madness. Discuss with the class why madness as a state of mind has relevance to Elsinore as a diseased place as well as a place in which appearances can be deceptive. The class should appreciate that Hamlet's madness - his 'antic disposition' - is perceived as a 'disease' of the mind and a way of avoiding reality; in his madness, he can play other roles and deceive those around him. As a class, make a list of all the instances so far in which madness and pretence has occurred. Update this as the play continues. As a homework activity, read the background information provided here as to whether Hamlet is truly mad or not.
  5.  Hamlet mocks Polonius and dissembles with Rosencrantz and Guildenstern in Scene 2. Look at his speech to his friends. In pairs discuss how the ideas and language add to the theme of corruption at court. Gather their comments on the board.

Learning task 3:

Learning intention(s)

 Examining key text aspects

KCs/ Principles/Values focus

KCs: Thinking – explore texts

 Relate to others – peer discussion

Learning task 3

Act 3

By the end of their study of Act 3, you should appreciate that the corruption in Elsinore has lead to hysteria, deception, further plotting and the death of Polonius...

  1. Read through the Act as a class and establish key plot events.
  2. Act 3 scene 1: "Get thee to a nunnery". Read through the scene again in pairs, including Hamlet's "To be or not to be" soliloquy and his dialogue with Ophelia to list as many references as can be found to corrupt and diseased images, such as "breeder of sinners". You should appreciate how spoiled Hamlet's view of the world and people around him has become following the unnatural death of his father and his mother's marriage.
  3. Stage the mousetrap scene (in an abridged form, perhaps) as a class, making sure that as many of the class as possible has someone else to watch to emphasise the elements of spying and layers of deception at work in the play. Remember that we, the audience, also watch the actors beyond the 'fourth wall' of the theatre. Freeze the action at tense moments and thought track some of the characters.
  4. Take a close look now at Ophelia - give out to small groups moments from the play so far which feature her, one scene per group: Act 1 scene 3 / Act 2 scene 2 / Act 3 scene 1 / Act 3 scene 2. You should produce a group mindmap of her character to explore the way she is presented as a victim of the corruption at court; look at her actions, her reactions, and her language. The disillusionment which consumes Hamlet as a result of Claudius' actions causes him to reject her and murder her father, resulting ultimately in her death in Act 4. Mindmaps should be displayed to the class by each group and explained. Groups could then make notes from the mindmaps.
  5. Complete a close analysis of Claudius in Scene 3, using worksheet 4.
  6. Scene 4: discuss Hamlet's view on Gertrude's marriage to Claudius - how is this symptomatic of his views on the court being corrupt? Polonius' murder - what comment might Shakespeare be making here?
  7.  Hamlet says to Gertrude that he must be heaven's "scourge and minister" - what might this suggest about his role within the theme of corruption in the play? You should grasp that Hamlet may correct the fault at court but, in Elizabethan terms, by opting for revenge, he is taking the law of God into his own hands and will be punished himself.

Learning task 4:

Learning intention(s)

Examining key text aspects

KCs/ Principles/Values focus

KCs:

Thinking – explore texts

Relate to others – peer discussion

Learning task 4

Act 4

By the end of their study of Act 4, you should appreciate that times in Elsinore have become desperate as the corruption unravels what little order is left. The frequency of the scenes adds momentum to the downfall of the main characters. Claudius is increasingly concerned, ironically, that it is Hamlet who is causing discord in Denmark and sends him to his execution, Ophelia goes mad and dies, Laertes returns to discover his father's murder and is drawn into Claudius' final plot....

  1. Read through the Act as a class and establish key plot events.
  2. Ophelia as victim: in pairs, look at the way she is presented in scenes 6 and 7, commenting on how the language and imagery (e.g. flowers) conveys her innocence in the face of others' immorality. Gather comments on the board.
  3. View famous pictures of her as another way of discussing the way she is presented. Discuss which elements of the play have influenced the various artists in their interpretations of her.
  4. Claudius's last attempts to regain control: split the class into two, each side to make notes on one of the following aspects of his behaviour with reference to scenes 1, 3, 5 and 7: 
Either:
    Claudius is desperately keen to be a strong ruler and uses diplomacy to attempt to restore order
    Or:
    Claudius is manipulative and corrupt.
  5. Conduct a whole class debate on the issue, in which every person from each team must stand up and contribute one point to further their team's argument. No one must speak twice. Keep score on the board, giving points for any reasonable point well made or even just attempted, quotations used etc. and removing points for anything you feel is justified! Extra credit should be given for references to the language used by the various characters. Establish the rules beforehand though. Alternatively, have the two sides condense their arguments down for an 'expert' panel of three students from each side which can present their case in a more traditional debate format.
  6.  Separate the class into three, each group taking one of the following: Rosencrantz and Guildenstern; Ophelia; Laertes. Brainstorm and feedback in discussion on their actions in Act 4 and how these actions perpetuate the theme of moral corruption in the play at this point. Gather notes on the board.

Learning task 5:

Learning intention(s)

Examining key text aspects

KCs/ Principles/Values focus

KCs:

Thinking – explore texts

Relate to others – peer discussion

Learning task 5

Act 5

In the denouement, Shakespeare draws to a close his theme and the ending apparently restores order to the previously corrupt court. Characters that are seen to have taken the law of the land and of God into their own hands are killed, often "hoist by their own petards". The notion of Fortinbras as being the appropriate man to take the throne is, however, always up for discussion.

  1. Complete a reading of the play as a class.
  2. Discuss:
    • The graveyard scene: note Hamlet's declaration "This is I, Hamlet the Dane": his certitude about his own identity does not excuse his commitment to taking the law of heaven into his own hands through an act of revenge.
    • Hamlet's tale of his escape in scene 2: how is he, too, marked as a character of questionable morals, despite his desperation to avenge his father's death?
  3. The final scene: stage it in class / watch it on video as well as reading it through. Discuss how far the corrupt influences in the play have been destroyed. Note the recurrence of the motif of poison. Conduct a balloon debate to explore why each character should / should not have deserved to die, with reference to the key theme they have been studying. Extra credit should be given for references to the language used by the various characters.

    Balloon debate:

    Pick about five or six people, each of whom chooses one of the play's characters to impersonate. Then imagine all of them were together in a hot air balloon that was rapidly sinking. One of them must be thrown overboard in order to save the others: but who will it be? Each participant must make a speech saying why they should be allowed to stay in the balloon. The audience votes, and the losers are disqualified from the debate. The process is then repeated until only one speaker remains.

  4. Fortinbras - is he a force for good and morality? In pairs, look at all the references to him, one person to consider the pros, the other, the cons in Act 1 scene 2, Act 2 scene 2, Act 4 scene 4, Act 5 scene 2. How far has the character of Fortinbras provided a counter-view for the theme of corruption in the play? He has followed orders (Act 2) and not been as vengeful as the other two sons in the play (Hamlet and Laertes) although he marched through Denmark on a flimsy excuse (Act 4) and largely appears strong as he is contrasted with the less courageous Hamlet.
  5. Quotation Quest: Split the class into two or more teams. Using Worksheet 5 read out the quotations one by one, alternating between each team. When it is their turn the teams have to identify (either quickest hand up or by conferring as a group):
    • Who said it (1 point)
    • When it was said (in terms of plot, rather than which specific scene) - (1 point)
    • How it is relevant to the theme of corruption in the play (1 point)
  6. Worksheet 5 could then be distributed so you have a list of useful quotations on the topic. You should be aware that imagery of weeds, disease, chaos and poison, which run throughout the play, are indicators of the corruption within the court.
  7. Prior to beginning their seminars, it would be useful for to undertake some reading on critical viewpoints of the play, which will help students fine tune their own critical standpoints - and is especially important for those preparing for Scholarship English. This could be assigned as a homework exercise, in which students must read an aspect of a critical work and then summarise it for a partner the next lesson.

Further activities

  1. Go back through the play compiling a full character study of Hamlet - his actions, moods, typical language - and note the change in attitude between Acts 4 and 5. Each student is given a scene on which to focus to become an 'expert' on Hamlet as a focus, compile notes on him in their scene to feedback to the class.
  2.  In groups, select one scene which typifies the ideas of corruption in the play and perform it as a celebration of this theme. Alternatively, select one scene and capture its essence in a freeze frame, with a key quotation chosen as a title for this 'painting'. Show to the class.

Learning task 6:

Learning intention(s)

 Presenting orally and in writing

KCs/ Principles/Values focus

KCs:

Use language, symbols and texts – structure and express understandings about texts

Learning task 6

Delivering a seminar

  1. Look at worksheet 6 which outlines the seminar task. Tasks could be chosen, picked out of a hat or allocated by the teacher.
  2. You will be assessed on how well you:
    • develop and support ideas about your topic
    • use a range of appropriate presentation techniques
    • how well you construct and deliver your presentation to your audience.

      Look at the ‘speaking standards clarification’ for information expectation regarding a Level 3 seminar.

      The following web pages also provide advice to help you deliver your presentation in an interesting, engaging and confident manner:

  3. In pairs, practise delivering your presentation. Make any necessary adjustments. Your presentation must be at least six minutes long.]
  4. Deliver your presentation.

Writing an essay

  1. While Hamlet is not a prescribed Level 3 play, from 2013 with the introduction of the curriculum aligned standards at Level 3, there are no longer prescribed Shakespearean plays so that any play could be used for the new level achievement standard 3.2 Respond critically to specified aspect(s) of studied written text(s), using supporting evidence
  2.  Select a topic from worksheet 7. Write at least 400 words in which they analyse a passage from Hamlet and/or analyse a selected aspect. The emphasis is that you provide a critical response.

Learning task 7:

Learning intention(s)

 Extending learning

KCs/ Principles/Values focus KCs: Thinking – explore texts

Learning task 7 – Additional Resources

Background notes on aspects of the play relevant to the central theme of this unit:

The Great Chain of Being

Print

The Arden Edition of Hamlet, ed. By Harold Jenkins (Methuen, 1982)

Teaching Shakespeare: A Handbook for Teachers by Rex Gibson (Cambridge School Shakespeare S.)

Video

Hamlet - DVD version starring Mel Gibson (1991) available on Amazon

Electronic

For an online text of Hamlet and general notes on the play, go to Hamlet Online

Teaching guides on Hamlet:

Teacher's Guide to the Signet Edition of Hamlet
SparkNotes: study notes on the whole play

Assessment and Evaluation

 (What is the impact of my teaching and learning?)

Formative and/or Summative assessment task(s), including how will feedback be provided AS 90725 Construct and deliver an oral presentation

Provision for identifying next learning steps for students who need:

  • further learning opportunities
  • increased challenge
English Teaching and Learning Guide 

Tools or ideas which, for example might be used to evaluate:

  • progress of the class and groups within it
  • student engagement

leading to :

  • changes to the sequence
  •  addressing teacher learning needs
See:  Planning Using Inquiry

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